by MrMartinet
I've been waiting to find out what happened next to the blushing boy Quill. You made the wait worth while. But please, don't make us hang on the edge for so long for Ch 4. Pretty please?
Premise still OK.
But sex is same old, same old. She jerks him off. He's not allowed to cum. She jerks him off som more. Eventually he gets to cum.
But totally lacking in details about how she's jerking. And no dialog about what she's going to do to his cock, or what he'd like her to do to his cock. No dialog about what kind of porn he watches. What gets him off.
Four stars, but barely.