All Comments on 'Oh My! Ch. 02'

Well, that took an awesome story and turned it into utter crap.

Author's response to comment: I appreciate the anonymous reader taking time to express an opinion. Even negative comments valuable. Other than ratings, we authors get no feedback, and, as I hope is obvious, I spend much time and take great care with my stories. Tight Whites, my most popular, has been opened over 22,000 times, yet has only 46 ratings.

I’m sorry this reader was offended. My characters come alive in my mind as I write, and often the plot just unfolds as the players develop and interact. I can understand how things becoming so quirky might offend some, but really, how else could everyone end up happy? I develop considerable affection for all my characters and wish them the best. If they offend anyone, please try to enjoy the rhythm, variety and cadence of the writing, and realize how much time and effort I put into each story.

Very well done - I love a happy ending!!