Oishi's Copper Christmas

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"I think this goes a long way to it..."

Debbie's surveyed the room once more, still in shock, thinking of possibilities, of their future together.

She looked back excitedly at Oishi, "Finally, you can knock down that wall, extend the kitchen and get that showpiece island you dreamed of."

"Haha... We're only away for three days. That will need builders and far more time."

"Yeah, but I'm signed off from work, and they said they won't expect me back until February. You said January was your slowest period, we could head south for some sun for a couple of weeks."

Now it was Oishi's turn to feel shocked, Debbie had picked up the baton and was surging ahead with her own plans. Maybe Debbie was also feeling some Christmas magic.

"Oh Debbie, you wonderful thing you, first things first, you need to recover."

"Sitting by a pool, anywhere warm, in the sun would count."

Oishi laughed, not knowing an answer to that logic, but something worth considering. She then remembered something important.

"Oh, I nearly forgot, there's more, here."

Oishi picked up a card that rested on a dustsheet, handing it to Debbie.

"What's this?"

Debbie read it but looked at Oishi, bemused.

"I still want to take you to a ball... On New Year's Eve, The Queen's Hotel is having a ball. That's your invitation to join me, with us both as guests. We can eat and dance through the night, as old college friends, partners... Or lovers... However, you want me to introduce us."

Oishi paused, holding her breath, seeing Debbie still in shock, but she still wanted that positive final acceptance from Debbie.

"So, Debbie, do you want to come live with me?"

"Yes... Yes."

Debbie flung her arms around Oishi and started crying again, to kiss Oishi passionately.

"Oh my God, it's wonderful, the best Christmas present ever... Oh, yuck, I smell of hospital... I need to shower and change... And I'll need to get my clothes."

"We can call around your apartment now and pick up your clothes. It may be a good idea to shower there, because your mum is expecting us for your belated Christmas Dinner at three."

Debbie's excitement turned to concern, "Does mum know?"

Oishi shook her head.

"Your dad knows, but he wants you to tell your mother. He insisted I come as well, so your mum can get to know your cleaner better."

"Oh, I'd forgotten about that... I'm so sorry... What about my flat?"

"Well, one step at a time, but if we get a painter on board, they can start on your flat before they start here. Then they can change the tiles you don't like in the Kitchen, and freshen up the colours, just like you talked about the other night. Then, if you want to make this arrangement more permanent, you could rent your flat out."

"You think I may want to make this more permanent?"

"I hope so... If you don't dump me again."

Debbie thumped Oishi, then hugged her, saying in her ear, "Led in hospital, I thought this was my worse Christmas ever, but it's turned out to be the best... Never could I ever have imagined you would change so much... for me."

"For us Debs... Us."

"We'll need to bring the Christmas tree over and rehang those decorations, after we've slopped more paint on, to cover up that awful wallpaper."

The two women embraced.

"Let's do one thing at a time. First, we have Christmas dinner with your mother. Come on."

Oishi walked with Debbie out into the hall to put their shoes on. Then remembering something important, Oishi ran back into the kitchen. She returned to present Debbie with her own door key, attached to a copper key fob, in a teapot shape.

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THBGatoTHBGatoabout 1 month ago

Really liked this: what a great romance! I would have loved to have been able to read the coming out scenes with both Oishi and Debbie's families, but it was still engrossing even without those. I got a really, really strong sense of who these women were and what drove them, which was wonderful, and meant I told feel for them as a couple.

Hottdreams80720Hottdreams80720about 1 year ago

I really liked this. I found myself sharing emotions with your characters. Thank you, Mike

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well done plot and characters. Liked how the passion was more about relationship than sex, but the sex was lovely too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good 5 stars, great story with enough sex but nothing repeated. Thanks and really enjoying having found you stories

HoltarenHoltarenover 1 year ago

Absolutely brilliant. Beautiful prose. Fantastically well written with a perfect balance of romance, feelings, drama and sex, the latter without crudeness. You are now my favourite author. Can't wait for more from you of the same category. Thank you.

Nicole2023Nicole2023over 1 year ago

Nice feel good story, I agree telling debs mom would be an interesting tale

Runner4069Runner4069almost 2 years ago

One off the last pages has the name Vicky...and it doesn't appear anywhere else in the story??? It confused me for a bit but otherwise another excellent job!

Osric9Osric9about 2 years ago

Lovely story, and a great happy ending! Would have loved to read the scene were Debbie introduces the "cleaning lady" to her mother, though - I think that would have been hilarious!

Through_Burning_EyesThrough_Burning_Eyesover 2 years ago

This story is like an oreo-- simple, sweet, and familiar. You get exactly what you're expecting, but it never gets old. (And I could go through an entire box in one sitting.)

If I can offer some feedback, I think the sequence of events could do with a little re-shuffling. If Debbie breaks up with Oishi BEFORE the stabbing, you get an extra dose of (admittedly cliche) pathos. And hovering-by-the-bedside is a classic Big Romantic Gesture.

It would also have been nice to see a bit more of Oishi's family. Throughout the story, they're the main obstacle to Love, but without an actual appearance they're reduced to a sort of nebulous generic-villain status. Maybe one holiday dinner early on, and one scene near the end of Oishi telling them to get stuffed.

But yeah, overall a nice, well told love story. An easy 5 stars.

Ravey19Ravey19over 2 years ago

A really nice story with plenty of detail,building up to the inevitable conclusion. Not sure what Officer Williams trouble was? Only marred by a few typos. Deserving of being so high in the ratings.

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