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by SophieL33
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Anonymousalmost 13 years agoCute
It wouldbe a good story but for the improper spellling and selection words.
SophieL33almost 13 years agoAuthorFirst Submission
This is my first submission to Literotica. I greatly appreciate any comments or advice.
Thank you.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoRaw first time writing as well as fucking
Almost got put off by trashy typos (lazy)and then I enjoyed half a page as your creativity peaked but sorry for me the story plunged into cliche. Keep writing...Mancelt.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agogood first effort
Story line could have actually happen, I liked that. Next effort spend a little more time describing the raw, sensual pure sex and sweat that must have been going on
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