All Comments on 'Older Mothers need Young Cock Ch. 03'

I suggest that those who wrote negative comments should read a romance novel. Or even better, take the time to write your own story.

@Author: I really don’t see any negative comments here. I see constructive feedback, particularly around not making Brad such an asshole. He can still be cocky but be nice. And totally agree with the pace of these chapters. If you can only write one chapter every 14 months, you’re not a writer.

Take the feedback, grow up and do better. Your writing quality itself is pretty good. The story is hot. But do better.

Good Story. Keep writing and do not pay attention to negative comments.

I appreciate the anonymous person who told me "Not to pay attention to the negative comments."

Also, I anticipate writing my stories a faster pace.

Mrs. Chen will soon be spreading her legs for her 18 year old teen lover.

This is the best one I’ve ever read! Please release the next one

I suggest that those knuckleheads that get insulted by FANTASY stories on a fantasy website like Literotica stick to other fantasy stories - such as Little Red Riding Hood, Mother Goose and Humpty Dumpty.

I also recommend some old tv shows like Father Knows Best, The Brady Family and Leave it to Beaver. These tv shows will clearly be suitable to resolve your nitwit outrage.

I will continue to write my fantasy stories for my fans who e-mail me on a regular basis

Also - Expect more type of my fantasy stories to be written by me.

YES, actual show don't tell sex scenes. And it's as good as I was hoping.

I usually like the nice guy stud stories but I really enjoy this douche bag stud. Probably because of how over the top and ridiculous everything is it's hard to take seriously. Keep it up.

And this is a petpeive of mine but try to use "and" only once in a sentence. Porno powerfantasy story or not it always bugs me

Just remember the, "it's fantasy excuse" can only go so far before it's simply stupid and distracting. It's not there yet but this town is so in love with brads football accomplishments that I'm expecting the president to show up and recruit brad saying that only brads star quarterbackness can defeat terrorism

What about Mrs. CHEN???

Trusting you will write about #9's experience with Mrs. Chen soon.

Get on it and finish this!!!