All Comments on 'Olivia'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Had to ditch this part way through

I’m sure it was very erotic and it’s well written it in any sexual relationship if both /all parties involved aren’t allowed an equal say in the big decisions then it’s doomed to fail.

There’s no power exchange at all, he doesn’t give a flying fuck about Olivia wants, it’s a dictatorship. Turns out he’s just another wannabe Dom. If she’s pushed into having sex with someone she doesn’t want to have sex with then it’s clear and simple rape. A real Dom wouldn’t pull this shit, all he doing is thinking with the tiny brain. Your story got drop kicked to 1*, I’m all about consent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Total bullshit

She can always go back and revisit the divorce when she finds out he's been hiding assets or valuations. And the rest of the "slave" bit? Someone will figure it out and he'll spend the rest of his life in prison where he belongs.

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