All Comments on 'Olivia Moves South Pt. 01'

I am enjoying your story however can we please get some background on Noah

as well as the direction he plans on taking Olivia.

Why is there no Air Conditioning in his house that it is always so hot.

Can't wait to read more but loving the build up to find out where Noah leads his stepsister Olivia to in his world. Happy new year and

Thank you for writing.

Your story is as hot as the weather where it’s set. I know I got hot reading it. Can’t wait for the next chapter. This is the first of your stories that I’ve read. Can’t decide if I’m going to start in chronological order or from the top alphabetically but I’m pretty sure I’m will read them all.

excellent story, you havent lost your erotic touch in writing.

10 Big blazing stars for writer. Very Hot. Thanks Buster2U