All Comments on 'Olivia's Life Ch.02'

by hot_honey

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yanevrnoyanevrnoalmost 16 years ago
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You have a knack for throwing your characters into steamy sex and precarious situations all at once. It would be lovely to see more of Olivia's life. Are you still writing?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

She accidentally called Greg Robert at the end. The reverse would also eventually happen, and then she'd be truly well-fucked.

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