All Comments on 'Omega Pride Ch. 03'

"Thank you all so much

I hope you all enjoyed it!"

I'm hoping you didn't mean this as an ending.

More please and longer

omg I love the last part didn't see that coming pls hurry with the next part pls

Omg haha I loveee your storyline so much! Update sooon plzzz or else I might go into with drawl :p <3

I hope this isn't the ending...I'm enjoying this tale and am curious to see where it goes. Please continue it, and soon!

..it's getting really good. I can't wait to read what happens between Delphi and this mystery man. Your stories are very enthralling. Keep it up!

It's not the end. I just had to thank you guys twice. I'll update as soon as I can, just give me more time. Thanks again everyone!

Loving this story, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

i believe Delphi just found her mate and like all Were's he is very possessive of anyone around her...and i can't wait to read more...

keep up the excellent work.

Donna

ive been waiting for this story forever!!!!! i loved this new chpt, and the new mystery guy< who of course is her mate!!! maybe he can protect her from these stuck up wolves, sheesh!!! even for wolves theyr so mean!!

I love it! and here I thought it was the Alpha that was her mate. Threw me for a loop! Can't wait for the next installment!

Just as I had wondered to myself how omegas and thetas mate. Thanks a lot for this and keep up the good work!!!

soooo glad to see this new update read it in 20 mins or less. lovedd itt! kinda upset that everyones treating her so badly, when shes been nothing but meek and humble please write more sooon :) ill be waiting impatiently for the next installment

This poor girl has gotten so knocked around this guy better be good! Please keep it coming - I hung on every word.

Please write more soon - your stories are so short that it's not enough for my poor little brain to cope with ;) Really intrigued to know who Wyatt is and why Delphi is his mate - they are obviously not from the same stratum.

i might be wrong, but the madame alpha is the alphas sister, she never said keric was the alpha, just that her brother was, thus i think wyatt is the alpha, and if so, the fan is going to take a pounding of flying stuff, hope to see more soon,

and i think delphi is not a omega at all,

More please love it

I cannot wait for the next installment. Please, don't take too long.

i've only just found this story, but am really enjoying it. Thanks for sharing!

Great story. Calmly waiting for the next chapter ... NOT! More soon please. :)

I really like this story but at things it hard for me to keep reading. I realyyyyy dislike when people are mean to others for no reason. I get that she's an omega but do you really need to make it so that all wolves are assholes to someone who's weaker than them. I would't want to be a part of such a pack either.

more please

I cant wait for the next chapter! I hope its soon

nooooo..... no.. It was just getting to the good part too! So is he like the alpha or is the other guy blonde guy is the? *sigh* i guess i'll just have to wait.

and I'm really enjoying it so far. I like that she is an omega (for now?) and that she isn't a super strong heroine (yet). I do feel like she might have a tougher streak in her, though and look forward to her receiving proper training and care and coming into her own.

I'm assuming that Wyatt is the alpha and I'm excited to see Delphi turn the pack hierarchy on its ear.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

OOOOKAAAYYY!!!!!!! I guess that means she wont be going out west after all!!!!! Oops!!!! Im so loving this story!!! I know nothing about him and Im already loving Wyatt!!!! MORE!!!

OMG!!!PLEASE WRITE MORE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE PUT ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Moremoremoremoremoremore!

i love you story

nice, is he the hunk from her dream? I hope he can get her away from the catty bitches, pun intended. look forward to more.

the good thing about you is you don't keep us waiting for weeks on end for another chapter. Loving this story and *IMPATIENTLY* waiting for the next installment on end for another chapter. Loving this story and *IMPATIENTLY* waiting for the next installment

more

wen is d next one coming.........

cant wait

love the stories, PLEASE finish! and not to hurry you, but, fast!

Great start, please continue!

i have been reading stories here on Lit. for years and i have to say this has the makings of one of the very best i've read..i love it i want more..heck i want it all right now ..:)...keep it up and make it fast..

next chapter please

I am quite enjoying Omega Pride. I like how Delphi is developing. I like the fact that she will stand up for what matters to her even though she is quiet and some what shy and unsure of herself; she shows an underlying quiet strength that fits what she has gone through so far.

I have worked a few places that remind me of the pack; the people around me so busy trying to belittle others just to make themselves feel important. It will be fun to see that shaken up (it doesn't happen enough in real life, excuse my evil grin).

I cannot wait for the next chapter hopefully it will come out soon.

I love your story and really hope that the next chapter comes out soon. I can't wait to see what Delphi's reaction is going to be

Oh my gosh!!! I wasn't quite sure about this story at first, but after an ending like THAT... Lol! I love it, and I am bookmarking your story right now! :D

I like this story a lot and cannot wait for the next one

I submitted the next chapter and the next installment should be up in the next few days. Sorry to keep you all waiting~!

Hi Canis! Thanks! I can't wait to read the next chapter! This story got me hooked!

Hi Canis, can't wait to read the next chapter..

please write another quick!!! such a good story :)

Really enjoying the different plot line you are using. Please keep posting!

More please !!!! Keep em coming ;0)

More please! Can't wait for the next one

I know you have sent through chapter 4 but I wish it would update already!! I am loving this story & have already re-read it a couple of times & keep checking to see if it has updated.

Waiting not so patiently for the next chapter :)

I love this story so far as it is a new approch on the cliche wolf story. Im so glad your going to continue but i hope wyatt is not the brother of the madame alpha adeline because you already stated keric to be her brother and a alpha as well. It would be seriously confusing if you suddenly switched storylines when you already decided keric is her brother by describing hair color as adelines. It looks really promising but if you do decide to switch plots or change charcters hopefully you will redit what you submited as not confuse your readers. Keep up the good work, I cant wait for the next chapter!!

I am really enjoying this story, keep up the good work.

A note to EVERYONE! Some asswhole on Mibba.com is using my story for themselves. Type in Omega Pride on the story search. If people can, do what ever is in your power to shut them down. I am putting this on all my stories as if it continues, I will more than likely be taking my stories off. Thank you all!

I was wondering when she would meet her match. And, weirdo that I am, I'm glad to see he's big strong protector (wow, that sounds caveman-ish...). Can't wait for more.

I thought she already met the alpha? Was the one who brought her there actually the 2nd in command?

like how this story builds :)

Love it! xxx

Let's see how this pans out...