All Comments on 'Omega Pride Ch. 04'

Please post more, I'm anxiously waiting!!!

That is awesome.

Great story.

Love your work.

I need more and I need it now!!! This is a fantastic story and all I keep thinking is yay Delphi! She so deserves a special mate! Keep it coming.

Should've known you would end it with a cliffhanger. XD

Omg I need more I can't wait til the next chapter release

I cant wait till the next chapter! You are doing a wonderful job keep up the great work!

More!!! This story has me hooked. One of the best werewolf stories on this site. MORE!!!! =D

Absolutely loved it!

Please don't keep us waiting too long.

You already have me hooked on your story.

you got me hooked!! continue please.... i cannot wait what will happen in the pursuit of Wyatt. :) i hope everything is ok with the betas. go go go.... next chapter please.. hurry!!

Man that situation is fucked up! She is going to give him a run for his money.

i love that you update asap. please keep up this AMAZING story. Is it to much to hope for another update today ? or tomorrow ?

I love this story. Can't wait for more chapters!

Let me start off by saying this is so far a good story with a decent plot. But you really need to work on your grammar and tenses.

i love it i check everyday to see if you have written again

Love it....

I love your writing, my only complaint is that it's too slow. I wish you could be faster, but if time is what is takes to write this amazing story, then I probably shouldn't be complaining. I just don't want to wait to know what happens next.

Thank you for this story.

Can´t wait for the next one=)

you have to stop with the cliff hangers...im in love with this story wow!!!

Yup, need more of this story !!

That's all I have to say... Lol!

...but to join the band wagon, please be quick with the next! Thanks for sharing :)

that she is not a omega, that she is his equal, and that the reason for her packs destruction had to do with the fact she is a very , very special wolf

that she is not a omega, that she is his equal, and that the reason for her packs destruction had to do with the fact she is a very , very special wolf

this was amazing but I can't believe she ran away after being mated. I mean she did pray to the moon godess and she had her prayers answered and she runs away.

I hope Wyatt will be patient with her since she only sees herself as an omega.

great stuff.

*****

Now that was funny... her taking a swan dive out of a window to escape her mate...some chicks have done much worse I'm sure l.o.l

I think Delphi's reaction is quite normal... I mean, no doubt she's gonna catch hell about her being an Omega and her mate being the Alpha. I hope she knows how to fight...

-392OhMyGoodness

she has spent so much of her life in fear and we all know that she has not had a great history with dominant packs. I believe it was no accident she was gathering wood when the attack happen to her first pack. I believe she was sent in hopes to save her life. I also believe she is only an omega because the packs that took her in kept her suppressed. Mainly the first one would have known more of what she was and forced her into submission drilling in the fact that she is nothing... less than an omega...the fact that she escaped these two packs on her own proves they were wrong and that she is much more than she believes herself to be. Maybe she should spend more time listening to animal instinct instead of human logic. Human logic will get you lost every time. I cannot say that in her place I would listen to my lusty wolf either but I have the freedom of being a bystander. Keep going please

he is going to have to be so gentle and forgiving once he finds out that she ran away but I don't think that is going to happen

I have checked on her everyday looking for this story. I lovvvvve it. Please hurry with the next chapter.

i checked everyday to see if it's posted. i am not disappointed after reading chapter 4. I love it! I wonder how Delphi will realize that Wyatt will be great for her...

Can't wait for the next chapter :D

Well done. I like how the story went. I would say it might be good to get an editor just to clean up the mistakes. I like how despite the past she's lived and the intense fear she has of pack males, let alone alphas, that she felt right with him. Even the human felt right with him. Now that her fear filled mind is taking over, she is of course running. I agree he has to take some time to learn about her past and understand her. I can't imagine why he let her wake up alone personally. He knew she'd wake up in a place she didn't recognize and though she'd reason out it was his quarters, she'd be scared and confused. As an alpha he should be able to keep control of his emotions such as the anger he'll feel at her running. He seems like he is hugely driven by his emotions.

I also agree with hiddenheart about her probably being more than an omega. She was a child when she became the survivor of her slaughtered pack. She lived in fear and with no direction and when in packs she was abused so she'd probably not have a chance to show more dominance. I really look forward to more and hope he can do right by her and help her heal and grow.

Delphi listens too logic way to much. But it seems like Wyatt is all instinct. That's what I got out of it. I love this story! HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER CANIS!!!!

I don't get it.

The story isn't that well written compared to what I'm used to, yet somehow it draws me in. Really like the story, though I don't know why XD

Keep it coming, this is wonderful! DW

Can't wait to see the rest love how this is moving.

definitely worth the wait! But if you make us wait too long i'll go mad!!!

I am loving this story - like everyone else I can not wait for the next installment. I don't Wyatt will be happy but the chase should be interesting :). Keep up the great work.

Now that is a chapter that keep me at the edge of my sit. THX U.

I am mad *pout* your chapter always ends in a cliffhanger! But as always, I am glad that you updated. Thank you

That was sooooo good!!! That story showed a lot of talent! Can't wait for the next one.

i love this..never read anything like it..got my heart racing and made me tear up at how gentle he was when telling her they could and how it's ok..i absolutely love it..i got to the end and was hoping for more..please add more soon waiting is killing me.

great story hope to see more chapters and thank you for the time you put in to it

I love this story so much!! It's such a great plot line and great characters!

Ahhhh! I swear I'm gomma die from all this suspense.. Or at least an early heart attack or something : P pleaseeee update soon I'm literally dying to know what happens next : D

Looking forward to reading more!

I am hanging out for the next chapter, I read this chapter as soon as it was up & have been checking daily for another one :) Loving this story, please update soon.

got to say, this is so romantic and so sweet. :) i love it! i'm a little pissed that there isn't more yet, but take your time. but i have to say Wyatt is going to be pissed when he finds out that she left.

I've had a competition I've been involved in and I found out tonight that it has been moved from July 31th deadline to October 31th. I'm going to be able to write more soon. Thanks for patiently--or not so patiently--waiting!

Just love this story so far. I love the characters Delphi and especially Wyatt - he can be MINE!

Can't wait for your next installment :)

I have been coming to your page almost everyday just to check if there's a new chapter out. lol.

Wow, it's great that you now have time to continue the story. Good luck on the competition :D

I am loving your series so far, very sexy and extremely exciting. LOVE!!please keep on writing!

please!!!!! write more soon

i check everyday to see if you have updated, please try to do it sooner! i am addicted to this story! it is AMAZING!

You all should be please to know that chapter 5 is coming out in a couple of days...that is all. XD

Thanks Canis - have been hanging out for next chapter - look forward to reading chapter 5 :)

A note to EVERYONE! Some asswhole on Mibba.com is using my story for themselves. Type in Omega Pride on the story search. If people can, do what ever is in your power to shut them down. I am putting this on all my stories as if it continues, I will more than likely be taking my stories off. Thank you all!

Why is she running away again? Kind of irked by that, but still enjoying the story. One tiny bit of criticism, if I may, is that you edit your chapters better for changes in tense (for example, using past and present tense together), and spelling (you're versus your). I'm a little weird about the little things like that, but I'm still loving the story development.

I really like your story so far... except for one thing.

IMO that Delaney pack sounds like a bunch of cultish nutjobs; a fact that makes me not like them, including their high and mighty Alpha.

Going to read on now... I hope there's a reason why you made them sound so unappealing.

this chapter...made me cry

so much emotion...

you can just wish for anything....

looovvveeee it <3

... but hell, I'm impressed. You've written the characters well, given an inside look into inner dialogue that set up the joining of the two characters perfectly. Existing fantasy lore on the "were" universe has been established and written so often and in depth that people forget it's FAN TA SEE and you can make up any damn rules you wish. So an Omega and Alpha mates.....how excitingly different! Don't know where you're going with the fantasy theology, but I hope you don't write yourself into a corner....Anyway...I thinks its good...5 stars good on this one...of course because of the sex. Always looking for group sex with werewolves and have yet to find a satisfactory storyline or author...hope this is the one. Anyway...what about trying your hand with elves, witches and wizards next? Either way, I'm there...It's your universe man and I'm just a Peeping Tom passing through!

YOU MAKE ME JEALOUS

WHY ARE YOU SUCH A GOOD WRITER

GAH

Loved their dialogue !