All Comments on 'On A Mission Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Way to go Katie!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
sweet

nice story, or is it?

you built nice players in the game...and kept the game going very nicely.

WoodyTheWise

mysterwritermysterwriterover 20 years ago
Hitting On All Cylinders

This story pushed buttons I didn't know I had. I hope it improves with subsequent readings because I plan on revisiting it frequently.

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