All Comments on 'On Another World Ch. 09'

Not that it will accomplish anything to say so, but hurry up! Excellent writing takes time, I know, but some of us have been waiting for some time now!

The only problem that I have with this chapter is that it ended. Keep up the good work.

Great chapter. I wanted it to keep going. The only thing with this chapter I didnt like was not knowing what the god and his wife shared during the time they had their foreheads together. What might they have discussed. I know its just a story but if it had been me i would have asked. Anyways like I said absolutely loving this series. I keep a consant eye out for new chapters.

"The time has come for us to speak, Husband."

-- I hate it when that happens :)

the problem with this chapter is recent chapters have come so late, ive forgotten all the qoojans names. the other problem is the chapter ended as i was starting to recall... ;-)

5/5

Great story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

you kick Qij-jah out and then bring in another? Man stop introducing all these women, bonding them to us, and then kicking them out.