All Comments on 'On Display Ch. 01'

by lavieenrouge

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Please do continue!

Patricia169Patricia1698 months ago

please continu ?

oneagainstoneagainst8 months ago

Very promising start - liked the way you concentrated on her feelings to build up the suspense.

james007bonfjames007bonf8 months ago

Excellent start and we'll written, can't wait to see how it will progress

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