All Comments on 'On Edge'

"Recycled cunt circulates under my mask"! So clever the way you joined up the shopping expedition to the edging, to the "brightly packaged junk food swiped at random". Just as well you randomly swiped chocolate bars rather than, say, jackfruit or pineapples. Mind you, there's a thought...

I didn't particularly like the story as its not my choice of activity. I have no idea whether anyone does this. But what is excellent is the descriptive writing that links every part of the story together. I would love to see how you would portray a more middle of the road story. If you do get around to it let me know.

Wow!

Oh wow!

This is crazy erotic!

Love the combination of chocolate and cunt juice:

“Depraved fondue fountain of perversion”

Well done…..

Thank you, Grusha, Westman, and Paul. <3 @Westman, not sure if I do middle-of-the-road much, but maybe some of my stuff is a bit softer. We'll just have to wait and see.