All Comments on 'On Her Knees Ch. 11'

by DanDraper

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sbrooks103sbrooks103over 2 years ago

Do you seriously expect many LW readers to go back over TEN chapters in other categories to get caught up to read this one?

LenardSpencerLenardSpencerover 2 years ago

Errr... Jim and Stacy plus Emily and Vikki. So, who was Chloe?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Took me a bit to realize these are a series of standalone stories with a similar theme. You really should introduce them that way. I almost passed over this as part of a continuing story gamblnluck

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story of a wife who wants to make sure her husband doesn't get any ideas of straying. The ending was a clever twist.

I agree with a previous comment, too many characters for a story this short.

Other than that 5stars.

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years agoAuthor

My apologies for not mentioning this was an anthology series. You were right, I should've mentioned what this was at the very beginning. I'll be sure to do that for future stories in this series. Thank you for your feedback.

iameaseliameaselover 2 years ago

A bit of fun.

It would have been nice to not have the over used cliched plot point you used to move it forward though. Other than that I did enjoy it.

Mac_LapuMac_Lapuover 2 years ago

Loving wife.

Loved this thanks DanDraper.

Probably the only non cuck wtory for today...

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years agoAuthor

@mac_Lapu thank you. I don't understand why all most of the stories in this section involve unfaithful wives. There are other areas about it you can write about.

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