All Comments on 'On the Other Side of the Mirror Ch. 01/06'

Everyone has his price

Ms Cooper the CEO of a slave empire discovers her loyal friends and employees can conspire to make her a subject of her own operation. This story has ample precedent in classical literature and even in the Biblical story of Joseph.

I might have liked to have seen more of the pre-quel the planning and execution of the taking.

Firstly, your writing is fine. Some syntax errors, but understandable, which is more than I can say for many native English writers. The scenario opens up an ending, which is also good...and surely it includes revenge.