All Comments on 'On Top'

You remind me of someone.By the way I liked your story and hope this is but one of many.

---the story content is decididly different . i will suggest that you stick to your own style and develope that

I also suggest that you do not read alot of the stories

--lest that you become similar thanks to you

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descriptive and hot.

ignore anyone who "suggests you stick to your own style."

some readers just don't like experiencing anything new and different -- they should stick to reading the same stories over and over and over.

Very well done for a first submission.

Your story was hot and written well. The fact that it's true lends more to the story. Keep up the good work.

What a hot story. Well written, erotic, and to the point. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Paul

Loved this story and all of your writing. Would love to read more.

paul_xland@yahoo.com