by halo1
Wow, what a story, i love it from beginning to the end. Now you got me thinking who was that mysterious man? Will there be a second part to this story. Hope so!
Shirley
I loved the story and the concept, but the obvious editorial errors distracted me from really enjoying it. Words were left out quite often and sometimes the sentences just didn't flow right.
From finish to end this was absolutly amazing!! Girl I totally got goose (chill) bumps at the end with the diary and all!! OMG girl really this was a very good read!! I would love to read more if and when you write again!!
The story starts out with a horseback ride, a dip in the old creek, and what transpires gets very erotic, then hot sexually to an end that is wildly exciting and worth anyone's time to read the whole story. Completely enjoyable.