All Comments on 'Once It Gets Dark Ch. 01'

WHAT?!?! It ended there? Noooo, there wasnt a name reveal yet ): The story is so good so far though, I can't wait for the next chapter to be uploaded!

Please continue this. I like the world-building as well

Oh fuck yeah moreod this

Fantastic story ! Please continue, I am hooked.

Damn. Bro didn't even revealed his name.

Hi everybody, thank you so, so much for taking the time to comment – this really means the world to me!

I have just submitted chapter 2 today (3rd March 24). So hopefully it will be up soon.

Loved it

Very good, a couple of typos but that is not symptomatic of bad writing at all in this case. You described the woman's body, I would also like you to describe his a bit more, that's probably in part 2 ;P

Love the chancellor's last name.

Excellent! Love this story.

This was perfection. Thank you so much, it's been months since I've read a story this good on here.

Wow… so definitely the best I’ve read on here in quite sometime. Good job @MariadelaO

AMAZING! I hope there is much more to come.

Hot!🥵

Very good, although I've never been in a Berlin apartment building that has an elevator! Well, obviously modern high rises do but not the typical tenement blocks that I guess we are supposed to imagine here.

Girl I literally made an account on this website just so I could comment... This was seriously so hot. You're such a great writer. Not a single word was wasted telling this story. You explained the world and the portals to the fairy realm perfectly. And the sexual dynamic and scenes were *chef's kiss.* Please keep it coming!!!

I have been popping into this site to read for a while never have I made an account until I found this story last night. How often is this updated. Is it on a certain day? I am hooked you write so amazingly well and it is totally unique.

I loved this you should make a sequel with the same main characters and everything like where they're in a relationship or something

Hi everybody, thank you so very much for all your comments!

I'm currently working on chapter 5 – I'm trying to update on somewhat of a weekly schedule, but I have some busy weeks ahead and might need a little bit more (like two weeks between chapters) after chapter 5.

It is a little hard to say when on what day the chapters will be online, because the approval process on this site takes one or two days after I have submitted the work.

You have no idea how much I appreciate your feedback! Thank you very much for taking the time to write!

This was so hot!! This is the only comment I’ve ever left on this site and I just had to tell you what a great writer you are and how perfectly you captured the nonconsent-to-desire arc. Please never stop!