All Comments on 'One Afternoon'

by PathLessTraveled

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ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 3 years ago

This needs to be thrown as far as possible away. It doesn't need continuing. We all know you want to show off but you know. None of us need this, none of us want details. I feel you are trying to call a pearl a slut and it's not good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I enjoyed it!

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaosabout 3 years ago

I tried to read it, I really did, but I just couldn't with the Point of View.

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I prefer "Teacher" to Dom: To help enlighten and uncover what lies within a submissive's mind and soul. All you need is some curiosity, a dash of courage and an open mind to begin a truly amazing journey of discovery.