by IwantBlackWidow
It seems like this story is going to take forever, can you make the chapters longer, I am going to lose interest fast at this pace.
Way too short man and not much happens so far, hope you're posting them every day cause i'm not waiting a week or more for so little, it is very interesting though, gotta admit
What a really idiotic story. Should've been posted as 'attempted' humor.
Would've loved to be constructive in my criticism, but really needs to be started from scratch