All Comments on 'One day with Sister-in-law Ch. 02'

by IwantBlackWidow

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jbpeters74jbpeters7410 months ago

It seems like this story is going to take forever, can you make the chapters longer, I am going to lose interest fast at this pace.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Way too short man and not much happens so far, hope you're posting them every day cause i'm not waiting a week or more for so little, it is very interesting though, gotta admit

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Too slow . Make chapters 2 or 3 pages.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

What a really idiotic story. Should've been posted as 'attempted' humor.

Would've loved to be constructive in my criticism, but really needs to be started from scratch

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