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69boiop69boiopover 4 years agoAuthor
Author here

If you liked it send your feedback at 69boiop@gmail.com on hangouts or Gmail. Thanks.

mustelamustelaover 4 years ago
Continue like that

Special, but interesting

sweetdreamsssssweetdreamssssover 4 years ago
Thank for giving flesh and life to my idea

It was really fun collaborating with you ...

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

The writing was confusing and unclear. I couldn't read past page one because of unclear sentences, run-on sentences, incomplete sentences, and whole paragraphs that left me confused about who or what the main character was talking about or how it pertained to the story.

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Hey stranger, hope you like my work. I am still a newbie, learning the ropes of erotic writing. Write to me at 69boiop@gmail.com on Gmail or hangouts. you can always contact me @raw_ero on Instagram. Still a long way to go. And uhhh. I like to drink water and breath. I hate d...