All Comments on 'One Letter'

Ridiculous

Ridiculous

What a preposterous proposition of a plot. A somewhat inhibited couple sitting at home and a large number of unknown couples turn up and walk in with no one complaining or stopping them. Said invading couples start fornicating left, right and center and the couple whose home it is 'accidentally' join in the fun.

Don't be stupid!

All 3 comments are rather unimaginative and sad. Yes the premise of that story are somewhat silly. It is a story. It can be sexy, make people think, and have a good time, which is exactly the point of a story. Also, we had in my life something totally different and yet extremely "preposterous" that changed our life for the best, particularly in the bedroom side of things, so, it does not stretch my imagination that much to read this. It is well written, quick, fun, like a ditty of a song. If you have nothing constructive to say, don't.

5 Stars. Yes it's a silly premise. So what? It's fiction. After the set up the story was well carried out.

And the beginning of two people who couldn't communicate what they wanted was true to life.

Please keep writing.

5 Stars, Plot-Smot, it was a great read and a sexy love story, maybe in real world It wouldn't happen, but how great it would be if, by chance, it did!