All Comments on 'One Long Dream Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good start

keep going with this story line. Story of O is an exciting story line to follow.

gerolfpicgerolfpicover 13 years ago

good starter ... now it needs to continue ...

DryhillDryhillalmost 13 years ago
GOOD START

An excellent start, nothing happens but the scene and characters are now well established for the fun and games that i hope will follow.

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