All Comments on 'One Long Dream Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great edition

the story is excellent, looking forward to where it goes now. thank you looking forward to reading ch. 3

gerolfpicgerolfpicover 13 years ago

still going ok, but now it would deffinetely need action...

DryhillDryhillalmost 13 years ago
HMMMMM NOT TO SURE

i agree with gerolfpic i would really have expected some action by now, i will give it one more chapter.

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