All Comments on 'One Night at April's'

ya got me........nice work

Fun "reveal"...:+)))

A solid 5 for April Fools!

ha ha ha lmao great short story loved the ending solid five

Good stuff.

I really enjoyed that.

Thank you.

Perfect!

And I loved it anyway. Btw you're a damn tease.

I just read this; you mendacious bastard! Great job! Suckered me right in - so I think I'll just write the sequel for you. Let me know if you'd like April to get DP'ed by the boys. Hee Hee

of little faith.

For such a talented write I expected more. Just not up to your usual standards. I suspect you just wanted a change of pace for a “quickie”.

Well done!

CUTE!!! BWAHAHAHAHA.

You have a noticeable female side: COCK TEASE!!!

Ya got me!

Well done!!!

Good story, not the ending I expected, even mentioned it was an April Fools submission. Definitely entertaining and one I have bookmarked in my favorites.

So good! Made me laugh. Best writing prank ever.

Winner!

Great April fool story! Some readers might not like it, but I think it was the very best.

a dick. :) Great ending.

that was a real corker ha ha ha

it's not april yet!

But I can't, kudos to you.

I chuckeled for 10 minutes. loved it.

Butbutbut hahaha you got me! 5 stars! Well played and well written! Puts away hand lotion and tissues...

than never could ever be. TK U MLJ LV NV

Nice April's Fool (in all senses of the phrase)

5/5 for the chuckles

Perfect April Fools joke on us....and a situation I can really relate to :)

But I like the way you think , , , Grins

what an asshole

5*. I'm surprised this story doesn't have a higher score. The ending was a hoot.