All Comments on 'One Starry Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Is this supposed to be erotic, or just a step by step set of instructions?

There's more to a good story than just a list of events.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Well this was ugly

Reading a technical manual might be more interesting than this mess.

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