All Comments on 'One Week'

by Ariadne_Elace_Vilove

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VegasloverVegasloverabout 4 years ago
Loved it

How she teased him into thinking everything was okay. How he turned the tables and had her submit. How the thought of him wanting a child surprised her. I would love to know why she thought he was cheating though. Just because he goes out of town for work doesn't mean he's cheating. Does his secretary hit on him and like most men, doesn't realize it? Is she very pretty? This is great a stand alone one shot but would love another piece. After she's pregnant. Or a prequel describing why she is suspicious. I DON'T want him to have been cheating on though! The great part is that he wasn't.

Very nice job!! Going in my favorites to reread.

Ariadne_Elace_ViloveAriadne_Elace_Viloveabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you @vegaslover

I am so glad you liked it! As I said it's my first story, so I was really nervous about submitting it, it's so good to get some positive feedback. I wasn't planning on writing a sequel or prequel but since you asked I'll start working on it!

-Thanks again, A.E.V

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