by fict
thanks a lot! I hope next chapter will be sooner and longer! Have a great day.
thanks a lot! I hope next chapter will be sooner and longer. Have a great day.
Good chapter but sooooo much shorter than the rest let's hope we don't have to wait as long this time
Sam needs to train her pet to clean up after he cums....
Looking forward to more. Thanks
I love the sickly wholesomeness of this story while still centering around increasingly complete control.
all u ungrateful sluts posting comments like “more chapter now gimme” need to learn how to APPRECIATE what is given to u. also ur mad that the edging, orgasm control, and chastity fetishist is doing just that w the chapter releases? please
"all u ungrateful sluts posting comments like “more chapter now gimme” need to learn how to APPRECIATE what is given to u. also ur mad that the edging, orgasm control, and chastity fetishist is doing just that w the chapter releases? please"
This is my favourite comment. Thank you anonymous person. I appreciate the love and the interest in more, but yes it's a story I am writing in my free time. Chapters well come on my schedule. You can too... if you're good.
Beautifully. It seems that I can believe in other parts? Thank you very much .
Oh my my. Fict thought of everything! Few authors have me looking forward to the next chapter this much.
Call me your fan!
Excellent. One of the best femdom stories I've ever read. Just don't like that Tam is also a pet. Open relationships aren't really my thing.
Looks like this is the end of the story I think there is another author who's picking up this stories and will finish it maybe. Who knows
I'm so glad that everyone seems to be enjoying this story and apologize for being unable to keep up with it. Full transparency, writing a story of this length has been difficult to prioritize while keeping the quality I had hoped to achieve and keeping up with the rest of my life and paying work. The story will be finished, but I will be completing the final chapters and doing a proper re-write/polish before posting anything further. I do not want to let my readers down, and feel that this is the best way to do that. Please follow the link on my profile to learn more about what's going on in my world and to find out any future story release dates. Thank you all for the kind words, support, and interest in the dark fantasies I pull from the back of my brain.
Thanks for developing this great story, fict - take your time and finish it the way you want it to be finished. When I took the top 250 stories from the BDSM section, and accounted for number of votes and not just pure score (Google "how not to sort by average rating" for Evan Miller's formula), your post with the rewrite of the first six chapters was number 1. Thought you might be interested!
Love this story so much thank you Fict, miss (just in case wouldn't want to get shocked.)
Life takes priority, absolutely and we will wait patiently (for the most part) like the good boys and girls we are.
Wow, it reads like a book! I finished it all in one sitting. It is good!
Just like with books though, I can’t get enough. If you are releasing more of this story I dont want to miss it! I will keep an eye out.
Thank you for writing something something of this quality.
I love this story. I so want to read more about Tam. Could she have her own spin off! ?
Wonderfully erotic series. Great characters, situations, and very very sexy. Thanks for putting this out there for us to enjoy!
I absolutely love the story! One thing bothered me in the last section. It sure seems like Mary is given control over Alex's new belt for a short time. After his bad week with Tam and Sam promising to be the only one to control Alex. Instead, on day one at this new home, he finds himself at the mercy of another person. Seems out of character for Sam.
If you have made it this far, I'm glad you have been enjoying the story. I'm doing a bit of a re-write to adjust for some chapters that felt right at the time but no longer fit the overall story and direction I want this story to go. I will continue to post on Literotica, but also hope to release it as a novel or novella depending on the final length, along with a collection of shorts that exist in the same universe but with different people enjoying the CFE creations. More to come in the new year, but you can follow me on Fetlife (Fict) or Reddit (Fict1) for updates.
What a great story. Wish I could have met Sam a long time ago. Hopefully there will be more coming...
I would love to buy the book when you release it, maybe a gofundme? Maybe it's easier if time and money align.