All Comments on 'Online with Neighbour's Daughter'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Nobody, anywhere uses the words you write, totally unrealistic, laughable really.

As for this, " His balls must be full to bursting ", do some research into just how much of a cumshot is from the balls.

x_pac6969x_pac6969almost 3 years ago

Maybe i missed something Whers the neighbors daughter?

Ripping hot story never the less maybe next chapter Evelyn gets involved with mum and dad

Dv69Dv69almost 3 years agoAuthor

Hello peeps, firstly many thanks for the positive feedback.

I had a story published concerning Dave and Carly a short time ago in which l introduced them. Dave had just moved into a house next to Carly, hence neighbours. In that Carly intimated an iminent internet session with her 27 year old daughter, this story.

There will be another story, mayhap stories, with Carly and Dave, l am in the process of writing that but it will be set 6 months in the future.

I hope this clarifies things.

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