All Comments on 'Only Consenting Adults Ch. 01'

It's interesting how most of your stories don't have villains.

Antagonists, certainly. Lily. But Lily has a certain humanizing pathos about her. Jodie is the only one for whom I can't muster up any sympathy. Maybe Damian, although he's more of a prop than a character.

You have a skill for building engaging stories out of the reasonable desires of reasonable people.

A hint of topping from the bottom by Syn. She needs to be put further into her place. I look forward to the gasps of every Domme at the club when they see the Queen Bee - top of the pecking order - powerful Madam Syn, that they all have to respect and know their place around her, is now but a slave. Once her status is revealed there is no going back for her. Every Domme, all who respected and even feared her, will forever look upon her differently. I can't wait for the contempt and their attitude to slave Syn.

And, just like that I'll be back to checking every morning for the next chapter of the latest from Oneagainst..

Great start! Will Lily make a return in this story??

Love your work, they should make an erotic movie of your wonderful writing