All Comments on 'Only Consenting Adults Ch. 23'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Will Rosa recover?

Will she and Aidan become a couple again?

Will Davey return? Hope not

DustofFallenStarsDustofFallenStars6 months ago

You can feel the dawning realisation when Davis realises what happened. It's not just that his mother couldn't cope. Perhaps the discovery could have been handled delicately. But some people like to twist the knife to make it hurt, because it's always winner takes all.

Jodie made it cruel, made it bitter, and made it vicious, and that's why it unfolded how it did and Davis lost possibly the only healthy love he ever experienced as a child.

Yeah, that's going to resonate around in his head for a while.

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