by kitazkitten
It seems like I'm holding my breath 4ever for the next one. Give me O2 so I can live again...lol
Oh dear. This Noctis really has an inferiority complex, doesn't he? I mean, come on, if he really is SO powerful, you'd think he'd be above *petty* revenge. Now it looks as if Kennice will never be happy, even if she should miraculously be able to make Cyrus redeem himself... :-(
OMG Give me the NExt chapter, only one thing off, nightseer had told her about the trials in previous chapters so i don't see why it surprised her so much. All information on trials was previously stated to her
You offered information to Kennice in this chapter that you have told her in a previous chapter. This would be ok but the information was presented about the trials like she had never heard it before. This might confuse someone who is reading this straight through.