All Comments on 'Onyx Dreams Ch. 31'

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chatchatchuckleschatchatchucklesabout 15 years ago
Mo' Pleaz

It seems like I'm holding my breath 4ever for the next one. Give me O2 so I can live again...lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Oh noes!

Oh dear. This Noctis really has an inferiority complex, doesn't he? I mean, come on, if he really is SO powerful, you'd think he'd be above *petty* revenge. Now it looks as if Kennice will never be happy, even if she should miraculously be able to make Cyrus redeem himself... :-(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
OMG

OMG Give me the NExt chapter, only one thing off, nightseer had told her about the trials in previous chapters so i don't see why it surprised her so much. All information on trials was previously stated to her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Enjoying th story so far but...

You offered information to Kennice in this chapter that you have told her in a previous chapter. This would be ok but the information was presented about the trials like she had never heard it before. This might confuse someone who is reading this straight through.

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