All Comments on 'Open Relationship Fail Pt. 02'

by BigVic77

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Garbage

They are really out in force today again it’s garbage and in the wrong section aka a real lazy writer

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 4 years ago
So who’s the guy she lives

Because it’s not her boyfriend.

ju8streadingju8streadingover 4 years ago

they are doomed as a couple

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Just another white cuckold

Just Another white cocksucking cuckold story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Oh yeah

one star for small dick. (BigVic)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
DISGUSTING

Disgusting story!

ctdansctdansover 4 years ago
well written

well written story but not for me. If he didn't want this why tell her to have an open relationship? I guess as long as he is screwing other girls and neither cares about STD's then they have a great Friends With Benefits relationship. If he wanted something more then it is best he learned now that she is not marriage material.

YouamiYouamiover 4 years ago
Erotic story fail!

I took the trouble to read both parts, before delivering my comments. I was mistaken. I should have stopped after the first paragraph. This was pure cuck wimp bullshit and cuckoldry is a fetish. Don't try to pass any future tales off as Loving Wives tales. You will find that the LW genre is populated with perceptive readers who do not enjoy being duped.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sure he said yes

Why not, he is no longer in a relationship with her, who wants a slut for a wife.. The smart money says he will be in a new relationship within the month and so much wiser.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Huge BBC Cuckold Fan

5 stars!!!!! Great start to the story, hope you continue with chapter 3. Love to see the boyfriend cuckold and humiliated. Maybe in chapter 3, Jenny can feed her boyfriend a big cream pie after she fuck Ash all night long in their bed !!!!! Please continue with next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
and the "garbage" just keeps on coming......

even on the last day of the year. I wish authors would put fetish stories into the proper category, but for some reason they all seem to drop into loving wives. Willing cuckoldry = Garbage/Fetish

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Written for the

cuckerati of LW, the weak, disgusting, low T males who are closeted faggots.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Just anothert "willing cuck" getting off....

watching his girl friend fuck others. Wimps who get off being humiliated by their wives/girlfriends. Just animals rutting. 1* for this garbage posted on the last day of the year. Let's hope next year will bring a better set of authors into this category, who tell cheating tales that are interesting without all that fetish garbage attached.

bigbob2406bigbob2406over 4 years ago

Yet more cucky shite.

TajfaTajfaover 4 years ago

Disgusting. There is no future for this young couple. 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Drano

Get out the Drano,all these shit stories are going to stop up the loving wives toilet when we flush them away.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

why would any man want to see someone else bang his girlfriend he is as sick as her shit story

patilliepatillieover 4 years ago
The critics are missing the point

If he cared for her deeply, he would have never advocated for an "open relationship". He is getting his nut off regularly inside her, sharing her, and if he plays his cards right if this was real life he could get control over the sitch and slut her out at the time and place of his choosing. At 18 who of us wouldnt have wanted that kind of excitement and pussy on tap? We would be a hero to our friends, bringing them prime pussy on occasion, and becoming the alpha leader of our group.

At 18, there is NO chance of the relationship working out long term anyway, why not get what you want from her, have her introduce y ou to other cool chicks, you can then do threesomes, gangbangs, etc until you grow tired of one another and that lifestyle.

DaddyWarBucksDaddyWarBucksover 4 years ago
All one way!!

Here they talk about an open marriage where they can both get some strange, and of course the female interprets it as I can not only fuck anyone, I can do it in a way to humiliate my partner,

ScorpioJJScorpioJJover 4 years ago
Patillie, sounds like fun if you’re into STDs

Disgusting

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent

Great cuckold story. I’m glad you show the love and concern she has for him.

Keep it up.

Sincerely,

Cuckold Paul

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Just one word can define this

BAD!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WOW!!

Please keep writing! I need a girlfriend like that.

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 4 years ago
Im never gonna believe that a guy

whats his gf/wife out fucking other guys for his enjoyment.

SamsungdfpSamsungdfpover 4 years ago
I don't understand

how can a male love these kinds of stories and experience?

I would rather run with my tail between my legs than put up with that shit

sorry, no stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I can see likening a story but never ever living it out . Stories are just fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another

Another spineless wimp with a slut for a girl friend.Why does no one write stories about strong males,who don't put up with such behaviour?.

danoctoberdanoctoberover 4 years ago
Beginning of the end.

Fail is the key word here. She's just a fuck buddy now to screw until he meets a quality woman. The next chapter would be the moving on to a happy ending for the boyfriend.

cindycbegoodcindycbegoodover 4 years ago
Can the commenters be any more hypocritical?

So we have a guy who pressured his gf over and over into having an open relationship just so he could screw whoever he wanted. She finally agrees and then takes him up on HIS ideal and somehow it's her fault? The bf even seems to be fine with what happened so why is this even a fail? He's still free to have his fun on another night. As far as open relationships lasting long term I'd say a lot of it depends on the couple. How strong is their commitment, can they have compression for the other or do they become obsessed with jealousy? But let there be zero doubt about one thing. If shes a terrible person for doing it then he's worse for wanting the open relationship first. If your slut shaming the girl then your terribly close minded and aren't mature enough to be reading erotica. Stick with Zane Grey westerns.

Mrhappy4aaMrhappy4aaalmost 4 years ago
I agree

Danoctober is right... This cuck is history. She is now a slut wife. He is always going to get sloppy seconds like he did last night...not my cup of tea. 1star.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Well, you're certainly making the obese bbc cuck lover quiver all over, but not doing much for anyone else.

mattenwmattenwover 2 years ago

The idiots are not dying out, either in fantasy or in reality. This author proves it with his story!

theVikingSailortheVikingSailorover 1 year ago

Cindy, I partly disagree with you that he pressured her to agree to the open relationship. She agreed pretty easily and with good reason. They loved each other and must have thought about 'happily ever after.' But each had very limited experience. The open relationship was a way to play the field but stay together. Neither of them did anything wrong, despite the dumb critic/name callers. They made an agreement and both stuck to it. He reacted with a bit of shock but that is expected in the beginning. They adjusted and are still together. So, Cindy, mostly I agree with you. And you are right about the hypocrisy of the negative nellies but I think there is more to it. They all seem angry. Ask yourself, why? It is one thing to express an honest opinion but why be angry? I think that most of them failed to satisfy a wife or lover in their past. The wife/gf/lover eventually dumped them and they have to assign blame in order to cope with their disappointment. I somewhat resent their anger-filled hypocrisy and somewhat feel sorry for them. Anyway, Cindy, you made a thoughtful comment. Thanks. And BigVic, good job on the story. Thanks for sharing it.

SexecutionerSexecutioner8 months ago

Personally, I'd say this pathetic excuse for a man deserves to be cucked. Eat those cream pies like Ruttweiler does.....

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Enjoyed the story - very erotic and very well written. Good description of the action and reason for MC being so turned on. Jenny knows this and is quite a tease! Ignore the trolls and their nasty comments

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