All Comments on 'Open Season'

by Hypnospects

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent storyline and I always give. 5⭐️ for a story with good humour. Thanks for posting it.

HypnospectsHypnospectsover 1 year agoAuthor

Ugh, it got cut off, my bad! Luckily it was only the last line of the chapter. It should have ended

"besides, it would be rude not to let them finish."

I'll see if it can be edited.

Small note, I know I'm not great at finishing long stories, but I am committing to releasing three chapters of this. It's enough to enjoy the world and be satisfied, but opens the possibility, (possibility, not guarantee), that I can come back to it.

Up next will be a little hunting challenge for Zeke and Matt in the library.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This one is clever and fun, I like it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved this story! Hot, interesting, and fun.

Not the greatest at reviewing but have pretty much loved every story you've written so far.

Really hope to see more soon and many more MC stories in the future from you ^^

MindControlMeMindControlMeabout 1 year ago

This was a lot of fun! Love the setting, there are a lot of possibilities here!

I hope this isn't presumptuous, but reading this inspired me to write a story in this setting! Totally new characters, same fun college!

If you're OK with it, I'd love to show it to you.

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