All Comments on 'Organism X Ch. 15'

Nice, you got it out! Like the other chapters, I really enjoyed it. I hope that the subsequent chapters won't be as much of a pain to write if you plan to continue.

Wonderful as always! Thank you for all your work.

Another great chapter, glad to finally see the cocoon transformation scene that you’ve mentioned since way back. Can’t wait to see what becomes of Wendy.

This is one of my top 5 stories. I just had to force myself to give each chapter 5-stars. When this story does end, it is going to be interesting. Does the sisterhood convert all the females at the college or due they get taken out by the female agent and her team? I have aways felt the Haley's powerful psychic power along with her mother's will have a major part in combating the sisterhood. Like what happened to the female agent and her team? What happened to Erin? What happened to Lucy after she was captured? What happened to all the parasite cocoons in Felicia's room? We know one hatched and Megan found it in the hall looking for a host. Does Melesia give in to Emily's mind control and become one of the sisters? With the adding of the 2 female professors, the cheerleader team, and the group from the female dorm, the sisterhood should stand at 30-40+. Will they continue to expand at a rapid rate? The male population at the college are in in dire threat of not being used for food. How has the college been able to hide the deaths of the of the 8 male students a secret from their parents? The one I feel sorry for is Felicia. She fought the change for so long even killing one of her parasites. I am surprised that Megan as not birthed another red parasite after seeing how it changed Felicia? Please keep the story going because I really want to see how you end it. I await new chapters on your other story "Mummified Remains". I liked the 3rd story you started also. I want to know what the lady is going to do with all those lustful souls she inhaled? Will the demoness return to guide her and tell what to do with all those souls? You are an excellent writer who has an excellent grasp of character development and story development. Keep up the excellent work. Senior Chief Hospitalman

Ahhhh a perfect perfect chapter do wish there was someone I was hiding in one the locker forced to watch the horror maybe a perverted guy ready to take pics but ended up seeing somthing so much worst, one who saw everything and becomes a ally of the crew teaming with Nina and such, knowing what happen and the threat each girl has, Megan thinking she won completely unaware someone else was there and who saw it all, her overconfidence being some kind of down fall but still a. Great chapter

In my opinion, this is the best story I have read on this site in the 11 years I have been on the site. It will be interesting to see how you end this excellent story. My only complaint is that you started several story threads and have done nothing more with them. Like the female agent and her team. all the eggs in Felicia's room, what happened to Erin after she drained the 3 paramilitary guys. how the college is hiding the deaths of over 30-40 plus male coeds, and how can people not notice the physical changes in so many girls? I am really looking forward to how you will end this excellent story. Also, what happened to Lily after she was captured? Will Professor Pierce be able to recreate the cure? Will Elle now go after Bethany? What will Wendy become after she emerges from the cocoon? Will her new form put Felicia to shame? I cannot wait for the next chapter. You said you were going to end "Mummified Remains" in 2-3 chapters. I cannot you ending "Orgasm" in much less than 5-6 chapters and that is pushing it. I hope you do not take as long between chapters as you did with 14 and 15.

Incredible! Can't wait to find out what Mira's tail does and what kind of mutations are in store for Wendy. Fingers crossed for a pov in her cocoon as she experiences her body change and grow new organs/appendages/whatever!

Is this ever getting updated again?

I hope you come back to continue this story someday it truly is fantastic!

Hey, I hope you're ok. Please come back and finish your story, it's really good, and I'm sure many people are gonna be delighted when you publish the next one :)

Please write more chapters!!

Coming from a fellow erotica author, this is hands down the best erotic horror series on Literotica. I hope you feel inspired to continue.

Cannot wait to see what happens to Wendy.

Love the story so far. But I've a few questions. Did you forget about the infected girls: Lilly (who was captured by some goverment agency) Erin (who fought hard against Megan to not be transformed) and Drew (the girl who walked in on Erin fucking her boyfriend while Megan watched and she was left to transform in the room while her boyfriend was very weak but still alive) I think with so many infections you kinda lost track of a few women who are also already infected but I haven't seen them since chapter 6 or 7