All Comments on 'Orientation Camp'

Well those were indisputably words in some order

Hope it's all true way to bad to be made up.

Sometimes a failed story can come down to bad and/or unproofed writing; sometimes to weak plot or character development; and perhaps most often to an attempt to describe something beyond the scope of the writer's experience, resulting in an absurdly contrived product. This story illustrates all three of the above.

Somehow it rang true. Not the best, but far from the worst story here.

People don't REALLY do this, right?