All Comments on 'Oscar and Emma Ch. 01: Beginnings'

by PraetorImperium

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theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterover 1 year ago

Very good! Chapter 2 please.

maddictmaddictabout 5 years ago
I missed somthing

Has anyone considered the source of Emmas real arousal, Oscar was doing the dishes. Who is the real submissive, she didn't have to ask him once to do it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Excellent!

Love your beginning. They seem like real people; seeming to have honest thoughts. A good level of trust, and Oscar didn't push too hard. J.

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I'm always sad to see good series abandoned by their authors without any conclusion. I promise that my stories will end when they are finished or with proper notice. Still alive.