All Comments on 'OSO - Karen Ch. 07'

Bad story idea. Poorly conceived, neither clever or erotic. The dialogue was written by an unbalanced teenager. With characters that are as dumb as rocks there was no one to root for and nothing fun or entertaining in the read.

1 star only because negative stars aren't available - yet.

I'm happy to see you're not indifferent to my story.

I hope that (virtually) splitting in my face helped you to feel better.

Liked your story and ask that you keep at it, Disregard the "trolls" who love to tear into the author's writings - but, in all likelihood, have never submitted a story. One suggestion, however. You might want to reduce the size of some of your paragraphs into smaller and more readable segments. Just a suggestion. Keep at it.

Don't listen to the haters. Great story. Keep it coming.

Thank you for the last comments.

Chapter 8 will come soon.

If somebody want to try to edit a story it is time to act instead of complaining.