All Comments on 'OSO - Karen Ch. 12 - The Final'

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jmkuehnjmkuehnalmost 6 years ago
Very nice ending

Love the way you ended the mystery. Can't say I am excited that you drop a girl with a dick in the Center and then drop the story line. That was quite the twist, and I would love to see you do a PS chapter. About how the characters on the island deal with their new situations and this irregular subject. I do see why you rhino there are many side stories you can write about these characters. Hope you continue

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