All Comments on 'Our Daughter Nude Model Pt. 05'

Yet again, you have written an excellent story !!! I do see that there will be a Pt 6 and will eagerly be awaiting it !!!

I do like this series, it's a nice easy read with lovely descriptive writing.

What I would call a guilty pleasure.

Implausible? Unlikely? Far-fetched? But a thoroughly entertaining plot. You've illustrated that a reader of "fiction" doesn't have to self-identify with the plot or the characters to be able to mentally visualize the scenes painted. thanks for crafting such an unusual yet entertaining story.

Awesome continuance to this beautiful storyline!!! Finally getting closer to sharing the most beautiful love that we can share with each other!! As we have one true soul spirit the we share every minute of our lives, the true beauty is when you can share the love of the intimacy with others that are also important in your life

will there be a part 6 to this story

,.............by being quite believable but ended up being to silly for words. However 4 stars throughout.

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Just a shame it seems to have ended.

I was hoping April world eventually get to do her dad.

"... my can of shave gel and a raiser (not mine) ..."

'Raiser'??

Was that meant to be 'Razor'??

Loved it!!

well written and all that, flowed well,, somewhat erotic,,but its all about the nudism really,,,but i know this,, if i had shaved april and had my finger in her pussy accidentally,, it would have been full on eating pussy and fucking her!! denise would have to pull me off her,, lololol..

The story never quite got off the ground, it promised to but stayed soft ( so to speak )