All Comments on 'Our Daughter Nude Model Pt. 05'

The story never quite got off the ground, it promised to but stayed soft ( so to speak )

well written and all that, flowed well,, somewhat erotic,,but its all about the nudism really,,,but i know this,, if i had shaved april and had my finger in her pussy accidentally,, it would have been full on eating pussy and fucking her!! denise would have to pull me off her,, lololol..

Loved it!!

"... my can of shave gel and a raiser (not mine) ..."

'Raiser'??

Was that meant to be 'Razor'??

I was hoping April world eventually get to do her dad.

Just a shame it seems to have ended.

,.............by being quite believable but ended up being to silly for words. However 4 stars throughout.

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will there be a part 6 to this story

Awesome continuance to this beautiful storyline!!! Finally getting closer to sharing the most beautiful love that we can share with each other!! As we have one true soul spirit the we share every minute of our lives, the true beauty is when you can share the love of the intimacy with others that are also important in your life

Implausible? Unlikely? Far-fetched? But a thoroughly entertaining plot. You've illustrated that a reader of "fiction" doesn't have to self-identify with the plot or the characters to be able to mentally visualize the scenes painted. thanks for crafting such an unusual yet entertaining story.

I do like this series, it's a nice easy read with lovely descriptive writing.

What I would call a guilty pleasure.

Yet again, you have written an excellent story !!! I do see that there will be a Pt 6 and will eagerly be awaiting it !!!