All Comments on 'Our Family's Cabin Pt. 03'

Much better! Being up front with readers about any issues you have with writing is important as well, thanks for sharing that with us

Good stuff on the sex side, but still missing some of the issues going on within both of the sister's marriages. It seems Karen may be having greater attraction than just the sex. Will you export Sandy's repression mentioned? Not sure how deep you want to go into those other plot lines, but they would keep this series alive longer if pursued. 5*

A cracking trilogy. I can't wait for more

I am loving these stories. I hope they continue

Grey is doing quite well. Will he continue with his seduction of Kelly, before he scores with Renee?

Outstanding job looking forward to more.

Can’t wait to read more!