- Fetish
- Our Femdom Valentine
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"But, what about Craig, you may be thinking. I know, because he's told us. Craig says it's like he's finally alive. He says he's never known the kind of connection he now shares with Sandi an me. I think this implies something important about the lifestyle so many of us here share. Sure, it's sexually stimulating, but it's deeper ... much deeper, as most of you already know. To wrap up, I'll forever wonder now about Cupid. Is he real, after all? Was it his magic that brought Craig into our lives? Was it his mystical arrow that caused Sandi to say she wanted a guy to do stuff too? Was it his spell that cleared our minds so we might see clearly that love can be bigger? Like I said, I'll never know, but I like to think there was, and is, a little magic in our lives. Thank you again for being here with us tonight as we share our love."
THE END
Author's Afterword: I hope you found this little frolic fun. It is not intended to be too serious. But I hope it does make a case that love has few boundaries. Over the years, I've learned that humans are just too diverse for me to be overly concerned about who they love and how they express that love. It's the love that's important. It's my wish that your own Valentine's Day is filled with that one ingredient we all need — Love ~ yukonnights
Dear Reader: Since this is a contest entry, your rating on this story with the yellow stars below is appreciated. Your comments are also always appreciated and always read. As I mentioned in the Introduction, this story is written in an experimental style I am working on — any constructive feedback would be really helpful to me. I enjoy how this turned out, but I already know the story. So it's only you who can tell me how it was for you while reading it for the first time. Feel free to contact me if you have a longer, more detailed critique. ~ yukonnights
- COMMENTS
cmj7116 months agoEnjoyable even though it is lengthy.
I like the topic & that there was tenderness with a touch of humiliation.
Anonymous12 months agolove it 5+ after a pool or dart game or something competive for fun but he wins and has to top losers or maybe a once a month because it is the 3rd friday or something they take turns as top ....all good tops should be topped by their sub occasionaly .. or top from the bottom you might be harder on your self than they would ... keeps things balanced. LOL at spelling nazis in other comments .. spelling error or typo ? i just call it my dyslexic accent we do the best we can with our handy cap ...do you laugh at people in wheel chairs ? or is it a OCD thing .. people are just so intolarent LOL
Anonymousover 1 year agoI really liked the tone of the story. The second last page however, changed a little. As previously stated at the toilet scene and Craig's referring to "breeding" was out of sync with the entire build up. Additionally would have preferred the different perspectives during the final scene. I would have liked to give it 4.5. It was better than 4 though, so I gave it 5.
Nicely done.
Anonymousover 3 years agoMixed feelings about this story. It’s well written with good spelling and grammar. There are a few mistakes but it certainly doesn’t spoil the story.
On the positive side, I really like the gentleness and genuine affection between the characters. I was concerned when I started reading this that is was going to be the usual, whips, chains, leather, pain and name calling scenario, so was pleasantly surprised at the more intelligent, empathetic approach.
I did feel however, that the story was perhaps a little too long with repetitive scenes.
I do think that this threesome have difficulties to overcome. There were moments when the the true nature of the women appeared; when one of the women said that he shouldn’t make a mess around the toilet as he would be cleaning it in future.
I can see a much more traditional dom/sub relationship in the future with the usual humiliation, French maids, chastity devices, bondage and even the dreaded sissy name calling. I do hope not.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoThis was the most intelligent story I've read on Literotica. Wonderfully conceived and beautifully written, wildly erotic without being smutty.
