All Comments on 'Our Friend Jack Pt. 02'

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Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Keep it cumming! Xxxtend this story.

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

MMMM

Great read.Thanks

maddict about 5 years ago

Keep your friend Jack close but keep Marie closer. I'm so glad she came down to be close to. I'm thinking you and Jack will have to raise the bar next time

Greyheaded1 about 5 years ago

2 dudes having sex is Gay Male category

Just ok written good plot good characters. After first chapter this guys only sex was no surprise. The guy on guy sex seemed more painful than erotic. The plot has promise. But you messed it up.

JustSexual_4321 about 5 years ago

Great part deux.

Great second part to the story. I really hoped they would suck each other but I guess that's coming. (ha ha) Still a bit heavy on the angst but whatever. And if these two are this close to blowing each other they would be licking up their cum not wiping it with towels etc. There are more typos in this part also. Waiting for 3. Thanks!

luvtodoit over 4 years ago

Well done

Got me nice and hard, I guess that's the point. Thanks for the great read. Hope there is a part three.