by intim8
That was a great story. Social nudism is nice. Even nicer is when the sexuality isn’t hidden from others. One thing I wished that had happened was; Jack and Diane secretly telling Ally’s parents about the plan and inviting them to the party to witness the act. Maybe even getting them into the spirit of the day.
I love the family dynamics, the deep love and easy intimacy between Ally and George, and the gently sexy story line. A very excelllent story!
The preachy, self-righteous and hypocritical "pamphlet" precludes 5 stars.
Thanks for the feedback, everybody. And I will re-read the pamphlet with that in mind. I appreciate it.
All nouns, when used as names, should be capitalized.
That is my mom. Not a name, not capitalized.
Here I am, Mom. Is a name, is capitalized.
Don’t be such an asshole. Not a name, not capitalized.
Hey, Asshole, give it back. Is a name, is capitalized.
She’s a babe. Not a name, not capitalized.
I love you, Babe. Is a name, is capitalized.
Very well written, love making in the midst of natural family dynamics and the free open talks between the characters is nice. I can't stand unethical stories, so this one is good at the same time sexy.
Erotic, without trying too hard. Great. A pamphlet for allowing semi-public nudity too. Not sure about they outcome of the ‘experiment’ though. Nudity does seem to equate to sex, nice consensual and universally accepted sex, however.
I've enjoyed binging on your library ! Fun sex and normal daily routines, to bring the sex to life. Does that make sense to you ? Anyway I did hope Sian and George get it on some day
I like this thoughtful, considerate and credible story. A welcome breath of fresh air in the context of the many that are primarily aimed at titillation. Nothing wrong with titillation of course.