by katerpillar
WOW! don"t know their relationship. were they lovers from long ago. free now to unite? gotta tell you that was powerful. also tell you that you have described how my wife and I felt after our long seperation due to a much longer than usual business trip. We talked about our joing after our seperation, and you hit the nail on the head.
THANK YOU
This may be a great story but I’ll never know because I can’t read it. I started to but quit after two paragraphs. Stories written in “First Person, Present Tense” are like nails scratching a chalkboard to me. I just can’t do it. It’s just a little quirk of mine, I suppose, but I think I’ve always been like that. I wouldn’t dare attempt to score the story since I didn’t read it, but I do appreciate the author’s effort in writing and posting it. I hope others can get enjoyment from it.