All Comments on 'Our Start'

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Just another depository of fecal material into the septic tank called Literotica.

I had no "vortex of feelings" about the story. A husband sees his drunk wife being raped by two strangers, and because his little weenie is hard, that makes it OK? Sorry, this was not cuckolding but sexual assault.

As for the writing, hopefully you are still signing up for the advanced classes of "English as a Second Language" at your local community center.

Saw that the little fag ooaa liked it and knew it was dog shit.

First paragraph said it all. Notice your scores are getting lower and lower. Must be a reason for it. Insult the reader, expect some payback. Pass on this one.Cuckolds are sick fucks, just like this so called writer.

I found this story really difficult to read, and only managed to make it through the first few paragraphs. I strongly recommend an editor next time.

The admins really should require some basic, minimum standards for these stories. It would go a long way toward improving this site.

The writing just didn't make your case for anything. Even for fiction it was both implausible and unbelievable. When you wrote it "was a thrilling humiliation" I wondered why? Why was he thrilled to be humiliated? Was his wife happy at her actions causing his humiliation? Did she take pride in it? This whole mess was simply random sex without rhyme or reason. It lacked any type of imaginative or clever writing and failed to create any interest. In the end it simply wasn't worth the time spent reading it. No stars.

What kind of lowlife pathetic loser actually celebrates the fact that he is a pathetic loser? This guy evidently. Geez how could one man be this pathetic?

...really seem to read all these stories and are sickened with how much they enjoy it? They feel so disgusted with how like they it, they have to post how they hate it.

But its really not much fun to read about the antics of the mentally ill.

Notice how the cucks always have the need to bash comments. It seems to bother them that others have an opposing opinion. Cry me a river.

Nobody describes the cuckold feelings like doctor yes! The shame, the arousal, the helplessness.

Why can't the haters just move on to other stories. There are thousands of stories here.

What happened next? Pregnancy? Divorce? Live happily ever after?

When he dies and goes to hell at least it will fell like home.

Still need to ask the stupid ass question, if she cheats in front of him why is his fault for "Not Protecting her". He if you switch the genders around that is he is pickup by some hot chicks it is his fault, still, and he should be burned at the stack.

Could anybody give a realist answer to this?

fucking moron. It's a story you sad insane fuck.

No man can like this type of lifestyle, who would really want to see his wife with other people. This can only end with hate , jealousy, and broke hearts. Something new and different is always exciting with a different feeling to it so why would anyone let themselves be put in a situation that can only end bad

Your writing needs some work - tighter editing - more polished conclusion - BUT this is an unbelievably sexy story. Well done. I've given you 5 stars.

That goes for you too asshole.

" It was humiliating"

and

" it was a thrilling humiliation"

with

sexual pleasure.

Great story. Well written . Also liked the one page format.

written by a baboon

wrote stories on this site. Written by a baboon!!!!! You mother is more like a troll

love your stories and the description of submission, humiliation and exposure, I hope you will develop this into a several part series, very sexy ... just ignore the nasty comments by the literary critic crowd, keep up the good work!

the beginnings of the thrilling humiliations in the submissive life he shares with his long time wife. On same day there were 20 plus responses. Seems there are quite a few anon trolls out looking for doctoryes48's latest story to hate even more. Hey, why bother? Note both partners began as repressed young lovers and then as not fully satisfied young marrieds. What is missing? Events conspire to liberate their submissiveness to others in form of a chance meet with two aggressive men. Bells ring in his head and her pussy. What follows over the next 30+ years is partly described in the other 7 stories. Doctoryes48, please write all you want, it's your

story, keep it going and ignore any and all critics. Thanks, Greg

The typical wimp/slut shit effort that permeates this pathetic author's life. Sick shit!

Hi, long time reader, first time commenter on your stories Doctor.

A curious thought struck me, "what must it have felt like for the husband to have checked into the hotel a typical married man, only to check out as a cuckold?

A cuckold that was still very much in the process of dealing with the thrilling humiliation of his new submissive status in the marriage.

Thanks for taking the time to write this story,

neil bowman

i too have been a cuckold to twpo wives and two girlfriends. It is so erotica to see a dom/alpha take your woman in front of you. It maybe very humiliating and embarrassing but watching this happen always led to my tiny dick cumming without being touched. Thanks for sharing.....

Thank you for your wonderful stories of submission. I love them.

Hope you watched as she was pumped full by any man that wanted her. She sounds like an easy slut that needed her tits and nipples used hard. I would love to grab her nipples and twist and pull them till she would beg. Then tell her to lay back and spread her legs for everyone there to use as a cum dump.

wimpy cuck shit.

He is thrilled at becoming a cuck, the best experience of his life.

I love your writing, particularly the theme. Please, please keep writing.

Beautiful stories. Please keep writing!

Love how submissive she is and how they make her cum. They should have had her kneel and suck their cocks in front of her husband making her sallow when they came in her mouth.

Love how she is so submissive she lays down for the men and pleases them how she is supposed to. Her big tits and warm pussy are meant to used to comfort men and she accepts that. Her having an orgasm for them so easily is proof of what she is meant for. It is so hot thinking of her giving them her body to use.

ILOVE her submissive side. Outstanding Story 5 STARS!!!