All Comments on 'Out of Control'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Apart from a few spelling mistakes I enjoyed the story and I could see myself in that situation, write again soon x sissy Lucy

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Brilliant story although the ending seemed rushed and somewhat cut off.

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