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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

great chapter, but kind of a bitch move towards Remy. could have done that far better than what you wrote.

Hurradiegams666Hurradiegams666about 4 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback!

I am glad you liked the chapter and am aware that things could have been handled better. Especially Alexia is a bit overly defensive in such regards and seemingly acts the same in relationships.

Looks like a few people were a bit upset by this developement (according to feedback from some other readers AND the drop in rating :/)

Nevertheless, I am always looking forward to feedback to keep my improving, so please keep it coming ;)

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